344 – Past (Part 1)

I don’t guarantee a 100% perfect translation.

Feel free to correct me in the comments.

Lots of inner monologue in this chapter.

Also, this is the first chapter of the ones i’ve translated stating a concrete number (450) the other were things like “over 400 years”. So don’t complain to me about that, thats the author’s fault.

Anyway, im waaaaay too tired atm, 2:30 am, need to sleep, not sure if i messed up on something, hopefully not. But i wanted to give you a chapter a bit sooner, since the last one ended on such a cliffhanger.

1 down, 2 more to go today.

 


 

Your Highness?

What a strange sounding name…  It’s like a word you would hear in an old story.

She tried to turn her eyes, after directing her gaze to the side, she saw a grey-haired man entering her field of view, at his side stood several women.

He said in a low voice almost whispering.

– “How do you feel?”

– “……”

She did not answer, but instead asked.

– “Where is this?”

– “The western region of the Kingdom of Greycastle, Border Town.”

Well, things were going in the direction she wanted to see the least, unknown location, unknown time, unknown figures, she wanted to stand up from the bed, but found that her body was very weak.

– “I am Kingdom of Greycastle’s Fourth Prince, and Border Town Feudal Lord, Roland Wimbledon”

He then continued.

– “These are the members of the Witch Union, you…   Do you remember anything?”

Witch Union?

She frowned.

Are they witches? Although I don’t know if this is a new organization, but at least they are the same as m…   Why do they look like they are this man’s subordinates?

Wait a moment, Prince?

She then recalled for a moment, and couldn’t help to feel dumbfounded, is this not a term used more than 400 years ago, when the First War of Divine Will was taking place.

Wasn’t that a name commonly used among the political powers of the time? This is… Did I go back to the time before the war started? Did the gods gave me a chance to make preparations ahead of time in order to save the Holy City and its people?

No, I need to calm down.

She told herself that this nonsense of story would only happen in some tavern. In the end did they finally came to rescue her? In the basement of the experimental building, a group of Devil rushed in, she released all the magic in her body in order to build the most solid ice barrier. The Echo magic stone should have kept sending the distress signal, waiting for the day they returned to the fertile plains and find her trapped there.

– “Did you save me?”

That’s right, that’s the only explanation, I was no longer inside the barrier because the witch army came back!

– “Did the Devil retreated? Did we win? The Holy City…   What happened to the Holy City of Taqila?”

After she blurted out this series of questions, she saw a change in the face of several people, they were looking at each other, revealing an expression of joy and excitement. A more mature witch came, with long red hair, and said.

– “We indeed found you in the basement of a stone tower, are you a person from 450 years ago?”

This witch reminded her of that Holy Warrior who turned the tide of the battle, she had the same red hair, as a flame to inspire people.

Compared to the gray-haired man, she was more than happy to answer the witch’s questions, even though she usually would not be so fussy about whether their status was low or high, being inquired by such inferior person made her feel offended.

If she were to complain to his master about this questioning, the man most likely would be severely punished.

– “My name is Agatha, I’m a member of the Taqila Exploration Society.”

She paused for a moment.

– “What do you mean with 450 years ago? Does that mean…   Have you been fighting with the Devil for more than 400 years? That’s impossible.”

The man called Roland answered.

– “You’ve been sleeping for a long time, things might be a bit different from what you remember. If your body feel better maybe we can slowly fill you in.”

– “Speak.”

Agatha closed her eyes and breathed deeply. Although this “Prince” behaved very rudely, she had no time to worry about such matters.

As the other party began to elaborate on the history of Greycastle, and the evolution of the Four Great Kingdoms of the mainland, she felt cold sweat gradually emerging from her back.

In his narration, Agatha soon found several familiar signs, such as the Concealing Forest, or the Impassable Mountain Range…   adding this to her memories, the conclusions she obtained shocked her.

If the names of those places were the same as she remembered, the so called Four Kingdoms were nothing but the long strip of land between the mountains and the ocean, a barren place that had no real development value in her opinion.

And the wild forbidden area he spoke of, was unexpectedly her very familiar fertile plains. As for the Stone Tower, and the Holy City of Taqila, along the years they have become unknown, buried areas.

How can this be so ridiculous?

But something even more laughable was coming.

Buried along with Taqila, was also the status the witches held in the past, in this era, the witches had become objects of repulsion, and all along the Four Kingdoms, the regime was held firmly by common people, calling themselves Kings and Nobility, same as it had happened in those outdated times before the First War of Divine Will.

But, for those old-fashioned people, to become rulers above the witches.

How was that possible?

She couldn’t bear to remain silent and interrupted.

– “Preposterous! The witches are hunted and killed by ordinary people? Who dared to do such a thing?”

Angry, Agatha grabbed the man in front in order to teach him a lesson for talking about this nonsense, but she was unable to use her magic, the cold frost didn’t gush out like in the past.

At this moment, she felt some kind of metal ring on her ankle, and after lifting her quilt a little, she saw it had a God Punishment Stone in it.

She couldn’t believe the witches in front of her.

– “Are you crazy!? Not only you have helped an ordinary man instead of a High Ranked Awakened, but also violated the Federation ban, using God Punishment Stones unauthorized!”

Only the Federation’s Law Enforcement Squads were allowed to use the God’s Stone, in addition, any person who carried, sold, transformed or destroyed a stone would be subject to the severest of sanctions, possibly even the death penalty.

The Prince let out a sigh.

– “I was worried about this.”

– “Don’t worry, I’ll talk to her”

The red-haired witch sat down on the bedside and covered her with the quilt again

– “My name is Wendy, the things are not what you think, also, the matters he spoke of are true…   I don’t know how it was in the Holy City 450 years ago, but right now, Taqila has ceased to exist, and I have never heard of this Federation you talk about, we all have been living our lives in hiding, until we met Your Highness Roland.”

“He has given us a safe place to live, and encourages us to use our abilities, and to study in order to make better use of our powers to change the world. Here, we can live normal, ordinary lives, without the need to hide, and without the fear of being hunted or killed by the church or the people. You should know that now the God’s Punishment Stones are everywhere, and we witches are no more stronger than normal people if we lose our powers.”

After listening to Wendy’s story, Agatha was completely silent.

The Federation was a large organization led by several witches from different kingdoms, among them were many High Ranked and Exceed. In order to win the War of Divine Will, they had to unite, and the Federation formed a huge army, but also, while managing various Holy Cities, they were responsible for training and dispatching witches, resolving disputes, maintaining the public order and stability. Only they had the power to catch and judge a witch…   However, despite being such a powerful organization, nobody had heard of its reputation now…

Where were those escapees who wanted to rebuild the order?

 

 

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51 thoughts on “344 – Past (Part 1)

  1. Hahaha! That witch sure act all high and mighty even after being defested by the devils. Just wait till Roland have had enough of them and carpet bomb the entire mountain where the devils are gathering.

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    1. Probably but i wouldnt round T hem Up all together There was for sure 2 or more factions with influence in diferent organizations. The police Federation may have be en i nfluenced by such factions

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  2. Thank you for the translation. If it is not nuisance you might consider putting the name of the person who says the dialogue in parenthesis.
    He said in a low voice almost whispering.

    – “How do you feel?” (Roland)

    She did not answer, but instead asked.

    – “Where is this?” (Agatha)

    – “The western region of the Kingdom of Graycastle, Border Town.” (Roland)

    PS: Sorry for my English, I’m using a translator.

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    1. While it might be useful, it breaks the flow of the story, breaks the narration and increases the translators load unnecessarily.
      So, it has dubious little benefit while having a lot of downsides, I wouldn’t want Seki to do that.

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  3. It would indeed be better to add the name of the character speaking, something like : – “blabla”, said Roland
    Thank you for your hard work !

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  4. Noooo, ignore those people! This is a novel, not a screenplay; nothing will break the immersion faster than A ) labeling who is speaking or B ) throwing in translator notes mid-page. I can tolerate a “… Roland replied”, but name tags are right out!

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  5. Oh you were an opressive divine choosen regime. You lost and your organization fell down. The only thing to remain ist the hate and resentment towards your kind.
    Now this made it very clear why the witches became dispesed.

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    1. Which is funny, the resentment that lived in the commoners, flourished when they ran away and the power of their oppressors became a shadow of a memory. Now this lady, while valuable for lost knowledge, could very well be a liability. As in, a hidden boss level type if she’s made aware of the ruins.

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  6. While its Really highly probable that There was opresión to asume its certain with the little info we got is rash.
    There are not certain hints that ordinary people was mistreated.
    Just hints that witchs were privileged Beings with Good status wich i dont think is wrong with what T hey are Capable of doing. Looking down on the ordinary while isnt nice aint o pression.

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    1. Are we reading the same novel? She clearly thought that Roland even speaking to her from any other position than submission as offensive and in her time would be punished severely. Furthermore, the management of god’s punishment stones in her time suggests that any attempt to challenge the rule of witches in her era was met with deadly force. Her dialog with her suicide squad in chapter 343 also suggests that commoners didn’t really like witches even in her time.

      They were the “holy” nobility of the time putting on airs just because they could use magic. Nevermind the fact that having super powers (max range 5m) doesn’t in any way guarantee that you’ll make a good ruler.

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      1. It is not clear just how much the witches of the time oppressed the ordinary people. So far it sounds like they acted like the kings and nobles would of the current era. Remember, Roland is an exception. If a commoner acted toward any nobility like Roland did toward Agatha then the noble’s reaction would be the same as hers if not worse. Getting beaten to death wouldn’t be out of the question. Basically any ruling class will act high and mighty, the question is how far it went on the systematic level?

        At least Agatha herself wasn’t too hard on her subjects otherwise they would go to such lengths to protect her. Although everything is relative…

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        1. ” At least Agatha herself wasn’t too hard on her subjects otherwise they would go to such lengths ”

          She tried to freeze Roland just because he told her a truth she didn’t want to hear.

          Indoctrination is a hell of a drug. Teach someone from infancy that they exist only to serve the chosen people and they’ll do that. Look at how easily people buy into “divine right of kings” crap in a reality where kings can’t shoot lightning from their eyes.

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          1. First of all Roland is not her subject. Second we don’t know if she was going to kill, maim or just make him bend a knee. Third, I never said she was a saint but as we found out in the next chapter, they were a lot better than the church or the current lords and nobility (at least the commoners were still treated as people and not slaves in their society). Finally, Roland is only able spread progress due to his knowledge (more or less a cheat), without that all his righteous intentions are nothing but empty talk and he wouldn’t able to do anything to help anybody…

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        2. Loyalty is a fickle thing. Just because someone is willing to die for you doesn’t mean you’ve treated them well. The muggles likely grew up being fed the “common knowledge truth” that witches were the only thing standing between them and brutal death at the hands of devils. This would mean that, if they assisted a witch, they would be assisting humanity itself, and every witch death would be a step backward for all human kind.

          Whether they were treated well or not, unless the witches killed their mother, the average person was probably going to help the local witch do whatever she needed done.

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  7. In other hand the origin of devils is a little more clear Now. A f oolish act provoked by the desire of closing the Gap between normal people and witchs for sur E.

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    1. Or witches could be the result, whether in purpose or by accident, of human experimentation to become like Devils.

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  8. Something just came to mind!!

    Will this new witch have a proper name? or will give a nickname or title?

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  9. ” If your body feel better ” -> ” When your body feels better then ”
    ” and dispatching and dispatching ” -> ” and dispatching ”
    ” Agatha hold the man in front ” -> ???

    thanks for the tl

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    1. Fixed, the first one, Roland asks in present tense, refering to if she can move the way she did, he can explain.
      Decided to leave it as is for now, although it does sounds better the other way.

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  10. Interesting!!
    Now we know that a / the holy city of Taqila still exists. Though it is in the hands of the church and from what we have heard about it it seems nowhere near as fascinating as this Tower of Babel…
    I do wonder what happend for them to become the ruling class and how they managed to get their hands on research about the witches and the uses of the God’s Stone…

    We already know there were sone people “unhappy” with how the things were form the book the Witches Union found and Roland read, but to this extend… :-0

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  11. Ah, this chapter. I think this was where the story started on its way to become an epic. Anyway, not much to say except that this was a great chapter and thank you for your translation. Although I must admit I am still more fond of something like Divine Punishment Stone, at least yours is much better than the clusterfuck that that other translator came up with… How is the Discord server, anyway?

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    1. Thanks, the discord, right now it’s pretty simple, and just a way to give heads up on the current status.
      You can also talk to the other people there, just, no spoilers other than in he spoiler channel.

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  12. I D idnt den y o pression tough? Just thinking than its to early to make conclusions. People had certain discomfort.. that doesnt mean Witchs mistreated T hem. And aghata reaction with Roland is Pretty normal to me. Its hard to swallow what she did hear Ofc she is upset

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  13. Does anyone here has played SC2 Protoss campaign?
    She reminds me of Rohana in that both come from the past and their attitudes.

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  14. I totally predicted this, I knew it was like that before, a power shift happened, it looks like to me that the Devils dethroned the witches power base, so much that they were unable to rebuild, those humans who held resentment and hatred towards the witches grew in number, and soon they built their own societies not based on Witches, for once the humans realized their own potential, however the devils that hate them both cared not for who held power, and so 450 years of war raged between witches devils and humans, till witches were subjugated and a line was drawn against the Devils.

    Kudos to the humans who managed to take advantage of the situation like they had done, they completely turned the tables on the witches, and completely destroyed their lore from history, Now humans are supreme, now they have the power thanks to those before them. Shes gonna be in for a nasty shock when she realizes how far Witches have fallen.

    Now this is what I was worried about, when you get powerful witches that dont want to be part of the system but to dominate, the resentment and hatred from the past will repeat itself here, with humans as their source of hate. Humans dont really need witches, if not for the Devils, human reliance would never overcome that obstacle, but not so now, humans have been in power for a long time, they have proven ingenious even without Rolands powerful memory, and intellect. She needs to understand that simple fact, while humanity was being stifled beneath their rule they have progressed to a point that they cannot be considered weak or helpless anymore.

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